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stalled and still,
a rement look over the wreckage,
life's train wreck,
a steel built and streamlined bellow of smoke,
jumped track,
flashed messages of design flaw,
you can still hear the sound,
of torn words and ripped tones,
dark, desolate, abandonment of light,
you can still feel the ground shake,
as the memory fades, so does its glory,
but a star remains.
a rement look over the wreckage,
life's train wreck,
a steel built and streamlined bellow of smoke,
jumped track,
flashed messages of design flaw,
you can still hear the sound,
of torn words and ripped tones,
dark, desolate, abandonment of light,
you can still feel the ground shake,
as the memory fades, so does its glory,
but a star remains.
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the poem: really i don't know what my words mean here, i like to think i am lucky with writting, but i know really nothing about structure and rights and wrongs. so here is my thoughts.
oh and the photo is by :icon:fox718
the picture: i whore my friend's art talent and the picture makes me think, it may be a little contridicting but to me it makes sense
to fox: sorry i didn't ask first but i just needed to submit something.
oh and the photo is by :icon:fox718
the picture: i whore my friend's art talent and the picture makes me think, it may be a little contridicting but to me it makes sense
to fox: sorry i didn't ask first but i just needed to submit something.
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post-apocalyptic things rock. Ok sorry, in all seriousness this is pretty cool. It's destroying and breaking down and then leaps a little glimmer of hope (in all it's literal sense). I don't understand how the picture goes but the little title twist was nice. And stop explaining things, we'll get it! Can't really say why, but ireally like this one. +FAV